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Military Academy Application Essays Samples

Former LEAP test prep student and high school valedictorian, Taylor England, is our guest blogger on her journey to get an appointment to West Point.

The best advice I can give about getting into a service academy is to start early and continually seek opportunities to build relationships.

As soon as you become interested in a military academy the first step is to reach out to the local representative from the school (each district has one for each service academy). This representative will be the key that unlocks many doors in your future. The earlier you do this, the better the representative will be able to advise you on how to enhance your application.

During the junior year of high school¬†apply to a summer camp, each service academy has one. Students typically¬†apply by¬†the end of January. The importance of doing that application the day it becomes open cannot be stressed enough. I applied at midnight as soon as it became available, and my representative was alerted. This¬†showed my passion for going to a service academy. The summer camp experience not only helps your application, but it also gives you a good feel of the campus and how things run at that service academy. I would also encourage you to go to more than just one camp. I went to both the Naval Academy’s and West Point’s camp which aided¬†me in choosing my first-choice. ¬†Don’t be fooled. These camps are just as much an evaluation of you, as you of the school. During the week, the Cadre will be taking notes for¬†evaluation of you; just be yourself, and it will all work out.

Back to doing everything early: the application for the actual service academies will come out at the end of May/early June as you finish your junior year. Another good thing about going to the summer camp is your application will be available earlier than the average applicant. Once again I stress the quicker you get all of the requirements done for your application, it can greatly influence your success in the process. Representatives have to wait for you to finish at least 75% of your application process before they can even interview you; it is in your best interest to just sit down and crank it all out.

Writing essays in the summer is not what you want to do, but most of the essays will be able to be used more than once. I wrote the first essay for my West Point application and was able to chop it up and move things around and use it for the Naval Academy’s application. Each essay is around 500 to 1000 words, so not too terrible.

Along with the application to the school, you must also receive a nomination from a congressman, senator, Vice President, or President. You can only get the presidential nomination if one of your parents served in the military. Each congressman or senator has their own application and timeline for when it is due, so be on the lookout. Also apply to each nomination possible. Apply to both senators, the congressman, and the Vice President as it it can only help your chances. After you send in your application, it will be reviewed and you will get a call IF you make it to the interview portion.

In the interview you’ll be¬†questioned about your morals, your activities, your thoughts, why you want to serve, and random questions (one of my questions was what was the last book I read?). You will find out if you got the nomination around Christmas time of your senior year. After you receive your nomination, you must then wait to get¬†accepted by the school. When the school accepts you, they will call and inform you of your¬†appointment to the service academy. Waiting for that call can take months; the first call to go out will be in January and the last call they will make can be the day before you are supposed to report.

What looks good on an application? There are three parts of the application: physical, academics, and leadership. The physical part is assessed by the candidate fitness assessment (CFA) and consists of pull-ups, sit-ups, push-ups, a basketball throw, a shuttle run, and a one mile run. Different service academies stress certain events in their application process. This test is standard across any service academy. The physical part is also assessed by how many sports you participate in, varsity letters achieved, and awards earned in any of them. If you are on travel teams or select teams, make sure you list these too. Just get involved and excel at the sports you are passionate about. The academies are looking for athletes. The physical part is weighted as roughly 10% of your overall application.

The next part of the application is academics, carrying the¬†heaviest weight (the weight of academics differs between service academy). Your¬†ACT/SAT scores, GPA, rigor of course load, and academic awards achieved are all considered. I can only speak from experience academically, but the average GPAs and test scores are posted on websites. I believe the average ACT score is around a 30 for each academy. Most of the academies super score: so take the test as many times as needed to get the best score possible. I got a 34 in science and reading, a 33 in math, and a 29 in English. It has been said that most service academies weigh math and English most heavily. West Point told me that I should retest to get my English score up. You will be¬†pushed to retest;¬†if it can enhance your application, do it! The next part of the academic portion is your GPA and difficult level of classes. If you have over a 4.0 and you are taking easy classes, they will want to know why you didn’t challenge yourself. On that note, make sure you are finding the right balance. Take as many AP classes and IB classes as you can without letting your grades suffer. However,¬†the service academies would rather you challenge yourself and get a B+ then to not challenge yourself. Keep this in mind when all of your friends are scheduling really easy senior years. Class rank also has an effect, but the service academy will take into consideration the type of school you go to and the number of people that go there. If your school says they don’t rank, you should know that deep in their system they do, and it can only help to find this out. So find out who knows it and get it. I don’t really know the average GPA and class rank, but I would say that top 10% and at least a 3.8 would be a good ballpark, if not higher. They also want to see academic accolades, such as national honor society, national merit scholar, best student in a certain subject, etc. Make sure not to slack off your senior year, because your grades are monitored.

The last piece of the puzzle is the leadership portion, which includes all the leadership positions you hold but also the activities in which you participate. Strive to be in as much as possible. Take on leadership positions such as captain, student body president, committee chair in a club, having a job, or leading a community service project. The service academies really like to see a lot of community service, especially if you lead a project. Become involved in a breadth of clubs, don’t just be in one type of club. Student council, Boy Scouts, Girl Scouts, and church organizations are common clubs sought. Also, there is a program called Boy’s State/Girl’s State run by each state’s government. It is an opportunity to play a part in the leadership of the state; the typical opportunity is to be appointed¬†junior year. Your school should be able to send two students to the program. This looks excellent¬†on your application. Some admissions officers will tell you to go to this program over going to their summer program. Therefore, seek¬†how your school nominates its students.

Overall, the process of getting into a service academy is long and painful….I’m not going to lie. You can ease the pain by getting started early and always striving to enhance your application. It is also important to ask questions along the way; ask your representative or people who already go to an academy. They will know what admissions is looking for. A service academy is an amazing opportunity to serve your country! GO ARMY, BEAT NAVY.

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WHAT MAKES A MILITARY ESSAY WRITING PERFECT

The role of military service in life and safety of each separate country is priceless, as each officer, irrespective of his/her rank, status, and merits, serves for a good cause of the entire country and its civilians as well. Nonetheless, to become such person, it is often important to know a lot about the past, the present and possible future of your country. History of each country teaches its citizens what needs to be done not to make the same mistakes twice, and very often, the price of such mistakes is human lives.

That is where a military service comes into force, any army is created to protect the integrity of a specific country, it is its primary role, but sometimes an army is created to conquer a certain territory. To become a real defender of your country and its citizens, it is necessary to learn a ton of information and develop many skills that will be useful when the time comes. The history of soldiery training is vast and complex, as it is written with the blood of those who fell in numerous battles.

Nowadays, to acquire all these skills, a person needs to get into a chosen military academy or school, and the first step on the way to the dreamed position is writing a unique military essay to stand out from the rest of the applicants. Knowledge and understanding of your strengths and weaknesses are key points if you want to write at least a decent work. As a proverb says "practice makes perfect," the same rule works with any type of military essays and the training itself. It is worth adding that such essays constitute an important part of the soldiery training program, as cadets need to master many skills, for example, critical thinking, tactics, commitment, attention to minute details, physical strength and compliance with approved manuals and rules.

HOW TO WRITE A GOOD ESSAY?

First of all, to tailor a winning application paper, for instance, it is necessary to choose a sphere and a topic for the paper. While there are quite a few great military essay topics on the web, try coming up with one yourself first. Many applicants tend to focus on past events and give critical analysis or review to memorable battles or events, but you are free to concentrate on possible future. By doing so you have a chance of demonstrating yourself as a good tactician, but be extremely opinionated when making such a decision as it may affect the whole paper.

Make sure to stick to military essay format required, and be very careful structuring the paper ‚Äď that is where a lot of writers, even good ones, often make their biggest mistakes. Once you learned everything you need about the formatting and basic essay requirements, you should focus on creating a catching introductory sentence to gain the officers‚Äô attention right from the start. Do not try to bite more than you can chew; it is better to prove yourself as a person willing to work hard and learn than a foolish boaster in the eyes of application committee officers.

As you may know, there are different types of works like this, for example, military accountability, argumentative, or appearance essays, and each of these types defines the content of the work. That is why research is so important here, especially if you are a newcomer and know almost nothing about the given subject.

Be prepared to make all efforts to tailor a well-structured and reasoned paper, and it may result in the need to make multiple revisions, as well as to add, delete, alter, and rewrite the text. If you feel unsatisfied with the way your paper is structured, look at a few quality military essay examples and see whether you like the way any of them is organized. Afterward, decide what would be the better structure for your work, and make the necessary changes.

Finally, remember about grammar, punctuation, and spelling. Check doubtful parts on the spot, when you still remember about it and do not leave until better days. In the worst-case-scenario, give it to someone who may proofread the work and find all the mistakes and weak places (if any). Remember, writing a persuasive essay is what you should aim for on the first place. Thus, make sure you sound like someone who is ready for the military and will be dedicated to serving the country for life. Before submitting an essay, check whether you like the written part of the work and prepare to wait for the result.

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